From: owner-alloy-digest@smoe.org (alloy-digest) To: alloy-digest@smoe.org Subject: alloy-digest V5 #28 Reply-To: alloy@smoe.org Sender: owner-alloy-digest@smoe.org Errors-To: owner-alloy-digest@smoe.org Precedence: bulk X-To-Unsubscribe: Send mail to "alloy-digest-request@smoe.org" X-To-Unsubscribe: with "unsubscribe" as the body. alloy-digest Monday, February 7 2000 Volume 05 : Number 028 Today's Subjects: ----------------- Alloy: OT: Critique needed! [Paul Baily ] ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: Mon, 07 Feb 2000 00:34:05 +1000 From: Paul Baily Subject: Alloy: OT: Critique needed! Hi y'all, If you've a few minutes (not to mention a sci-fi bent) I've put a few pages of some hen-scratchings I've been doing over the last two years or so online. These are what I call 'glimpses': /very/ rough sketches of a story I may or may not write some day. I'd really appreciate any comments you might have on them. I mean if you can't share your most embarrassing stuff with fellow Alloyites who can you share them with? I should warn you that I have at least two others in the works and since I'm between contracts right now (can we say 'catfood diet' kiddies?) they may very well get finished, so now would be the best time to tell me to stop... http://www.ozemail.com.au/~justsomeguy/preview/ Oh, and deem the 'tandem story' joke duly told already okay? :) TIA, Paul. This message powered by the beautiful sound of "rain on a tin roof" off Rain On A Tin Roof / well, God, I guess... ------------------------------ End of alloy-digest V5 #28 **************************