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From "Ed Lynn" <pasquinade@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Lavigne Litigation begins
Date Thu, 5 Jul 2007 10:26:48 -0400

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On 7/5/07, Sam Smith <sam@lullabypit.com> wrote:
> I snorted Pepsi through my nose on this one.
> > "Avril's a great songwriter and she's proving it over and over and
> > over again," McBride said from Vancouver, noting that Lavigne heard
> > the Rubinoos song for the first time after learning of the suit.

Definitely way too wordy and in need of an edit. How's this one?

"Avril's a... songwriter and she's... over...," McBride said from
Vancouver, noting that Lavigne heard the Rubinoos song for the first
time after learning of the suit.

Yes. That's much better.

ed.

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